Added PRIDE’S CHILDREN – Chapter 7, Scene 4

This week’s post continues with Chapter 7, Scene 4 (1.7.4).

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PRIDE’S CHILDREN Table of Contents

End of previous scene, followed by the link to the new scene:

End of Chapter 7, Scene 3

He leaned into the chair, placed hands on the armrests, turned to face his hostess with a half-formed question, to find she had gone rigid. Ah—damned thoughtlessness. Most people found it amusing when he mucked about with their things, absorbing a gestalt—but she wasn’t ‘most people.’ “Why’d you let me? I’ve messed up your settings.”

She blinked several times, drew an audible breath. “Don’t worry—easy to fix; Stephen loves to spin.”


“My daughter Susan’s boy––he’s four.”

Why not ‘grandson’?

~ ~ ~

PRIDE’S CHILDREN, Chapter 7, Scene 4

Copyright by Alicia Butcher Ehrhardt 2013.


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