This week post is the last scene in Chapter 12, Scene 4 (1.12.4).
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It was warm (75°), sunny, and I got to work in the garden because I FINISHED TAXES SATURDAY NIGHT! I prefer pulling weeds to doing taxes. I LIKE pulling weeds.
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PRIDE’S CHILDREN, Chapter 12, Scene 4 [Bianca]
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